PandaRawr

One, two, three bump, bump, bump. Stop. My breath catches, and for a moment I forget me promise. I forget not to think about you, forget not to love you. ...

I think it was great. I like the theme and the repeating line Only at the apocalypse. The idea is great but when you get to the line about the ...

B.est F.reiends F.orever Leaving is hard but I won't forget you and even though we'll be apart I hope you'll remember me too. For years you've stood beside me and ...

If you haven't read the first couple of chapters for my book here are the links Chapter one Chapter two Chapter three Oh and here is a link to describe ...

Where are the pictures??? O_O

Tears that couldn't be shed were filling my heart, drowning me in my own sorrow. I held on to your memory when it all came crashing back down. For months ...

Oh My Freaking God! How could you end it like that? I need more! Soon. Please P.M. me if you decide to continue it. P.S. Ummm... sorry for the fact ...

Oh I loved this! The concept was new and fresh. Our narrator (lets call her Nelly) so Nelly to me seemed very real and deep. If she were a character ...

First of all this was interesting. the first completely caught my attention. I think the idea is great and I would love to see it expanded but of course I ...

Brilliant. The best writing is when you feel strongly about it and you can convey that emotion to the reader. I felt a lot from this. At the end I ...

Ahh. This was pure joy. Well it was actually very dark but it fills me with joy how beautifuly and well written this was! I absolultley love this. There is ...

I didn't think anyone had ever been in that situation before so I couldn't know how to process everything. I focused on pushing air in and out of my lungs, ...

Well this is very interesting and has lots of potential. I love the theme 'Look out of the Window' but it got a bit repetitive. I suggest breaking it into ...

First off I want to tell you what I thought good about this. I loved it. The concept was amazing and the characters developed beautifully. My favorite lie was, "In ...

I enjoyed this so much. The concept was pure genius, and had me hanging on every word. There was a bit of humor which made this even better. I love ...