PancakeandWaffle

I actually was about to fix that XD I will be sure yo clear up the parts you mentioned. Thank you! ~Waffle

Glad you liked it!

Thanks for the review, I'll use this insight in the future thanks :).

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oi, veh!

Thank you for the link, that was very helpful. It is fine that you don't want to capitalize and etc..., but I always like to because I feel it is ...

Ok, I see what you mean there. Thank you!

Ok! I can't wait to see how it all turns out ^-^

Well done! I would like to point out just how awkward your first sentence was. Just needs something that will make since. Great job. Very unique. ~Waffle

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To state the obvious, there where things spelled wrong, but I am not sure if it was on purpose. Good rhyming. Good punctuation. And good for being made at lunch. ...

And if I wanted to add in what it was about, I would have

First of all, I would like to say thank you so much for reviewing! Second, everything I mention in the poem has a meaning and has a purpose. The animals, ...

I will definitely work on those things. Thank you!

Thank you!