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Thanks...High. Or should that be Harry?

Thank a lot to the three of you, rest assured your reviews are much appreciated :)

I'm just writing this to tell you this is really interesting. I was hooked. Literally. I suppose that all the nitpicks have been covered, so I'll just say one last ...

thanks a million Pink :)

is it better now? P.S. Sorry for leaving the same ending, dont have any other ideas :S

ok tnx vry much...ill try to improve what i can :)

k ill c what i can do :)

tnx wordsmith for your comments :)

Yes, it is quite a good story, but as people pointed out, you overdid it with the elipses...otherwise, very good job :)