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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Back to Basics

    Trust and forgiveness together the key. Our world’s foundations come down to thee: Happiness, soul and the heart of me. The key to a certain eternity. Development on this is ...

    Jul 26, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: London Rain

    This is a really descriptive poem. You can easily visualise the scenes in each stanza. Although some of the lines are too long; you can take quite a few pointless ...

    Jul 26, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Beauty is a Beast

    I thinks it's a really good poem, and i wish I could write like you! It paints a image in your head really well. You havn't let it string out ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: hello hello hello

    I dont really know what to write... I have a few things to put on here, but not much. I hope you like my stuff, and it's not too boring. ...

    Jul 23, 2009


grammar is hard and i dislike it immensely
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