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PKMichelle


About PKMichelle

I'm not the greatest writer. I'm actually very inconsistent. But I wanted to try getting my work out there to someone, and this is it.

I mostly write horrors and thrillers, and I'm definitely looking for some feedback on both. As a young writer, I always appreciate some advice and/or guidance, and I am always looking for ways to improve my writing!

Writer's Block Combat Pad - This is for me to remember, but you can use it too!! thanks, avianwings47!!!

Spoiler! :
This is the review template I use. It's also for me because I hate going on a scavenger hunt to try and find an unedited version... anyone's free to use it or change it as they please :D

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[color=darkviolet][b]Hello, friend![/b][/color]
I saw your work in the Green Room and figured I’d check it out!

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[color=mediumblue][b]Per my interpretation,[/b][/color]


[color=red][b]If I could offer any sort of advice,[/b][/color]

But, obviously, this is just a suggestion, and it's always up to the writer, so please take this criticism lightly and know that I mean nothing negative by it—only trying to provide a somewhat useful critique.


[color=limegreen][b]If I had to pick my favorite part,[/b][/color]


[color=darkorange][b]Overall,[/b][/color]

Thank you for taking the time to write and post this, and I hope this review is of some use to you!


[color=deeppink][b]Goodbye for now! I hope you have a magnificent day (or night) wherever you are![/b][/color]


Pronouns: she/her


Occupation

unemployed


Did you ever hear the Tragedy of Darth Plagueis the wise? I thought not. It's not a story the Jedi would tell you. It's a Sith legend. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of the Sith, so powerful and so wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life... He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful... the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. It's ironic he could save others from death, but not himself.
— RazorSharpPencil