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No, I'm kidding. That was really cool. It kept me thinking... what is wrong them? Leave it to you to use the name Jacob. Anyway, the only errors I saw ...

Yay! It was awesome. It made me really sad, too. I swear I almost cried. Ha ha. Anyway, I think you did a really good job. Leave it to you ...

All of this was my fault. How could I have let this happen! I shouldn't have been so careless. Amy was dead; I couldn't do anything about it. Why did ...

Hey!! I really like it. The concept is cool and original. And I liked your adjectives. I know, I'm such a dork. Anyway, time to be your critic (I'm your ...

Crap, she pregnant!!! Wow, I really feel bad for her. The Mario and Luigi thing was hilarious. I would feel bad too if my mom named me by a character ...

Hey!! I'm loving the story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm really anxious. Anyway, just a tip. In the part that you say the ...

Hey, I think the chapter was really cool and original. All you have to work on is on your grammatical errors, especially with your commas. To help the reader feel ...