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Hello, I have a random question that I want to just throw out here, and I'd like for EVERYONE possible to answer. I'm creating a male character who's strong, focused ...

Actually Sureal, I disagree. Christopher Fry once said, " Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement.", and here, you have the writer exploring his own amazement. ...

The Inevitable War If you could see what I see, you'd know that the world is in grave danger. Where sturdy forests once reside, now lives a foreshadow of what's ...

Truest Love I love the way you look at me when I can't look at myself. I seek the warmth inside your eyes, the warmth that knows me best. I ...

Alright, I too looked at the criticism this poem has been given and I pondered whether or not write anything. This IS a writing forum and the purpose of this ...

Hello, My name is Jacintha and I've decided to critique your work tonight. [/quote]As my face blush, My blood rush It doesn't really make sense. Maybe if you change it ...

Thanks for critiquing my work and giving my some great suggestions.

Ohhhh. That makes sense. Well either way it's a great poem!

The Absent Force This is not what I had planned. It’s like I’ve been awakened and the world is falling down. I can still feel you, you’re nearly here. I ...

Well, "or" usually suggests and alternative or an opposite. With all of the negativity you started off with by writing: "As those who raped the earth, and gave nothing back? ...

God, Just out of curiosity, what did you mean by "Glow-In-The-Dark"?

I really liked reading this poem. I thought it started out with a great question that had me thinking from beginning to end. When I read the last part, " ...

Alright, first of all let me just say that this thought blurb of yours kept my attention the entire time. If you knew me, you'd know that isn't a easy ...

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