OynxFire

Hi there! Oynx here to give ya a review! :) First. I just want to say that I really liked your story. Very much. :) It caught my attention immediatly ...

I'm still kind of new, but I know that this dosen't belong here. I would go get a mod to move this probably to the lounge or somewhere more appropriate.

Hey there Oynx here to give you a review! I read through this confused nearly the entire time. I mean, the girl is confused, asking what this guy is and ...

Hi there! Oynx here to give you a review. First, you had a very boring way of presenting your story. It got a little better as you went on, but ...

Hello again Kyousuke! I'm here to review yet again. :D First, the script, dialogue didn't work. It was almost unorganized looking and drew too much attention and confusion. I'd stick ...

What I meant was, from what you described, Damon's *looks* were perfect. (; And thanks for the prolouge. It does explain some things a little more. Glad my review helped!

Hi there! Oynx here to review! :D First, your beginning was pretty funny. The way you described the gym teacher - priceless! :D However, I think that you went a ...

Hey! I'm Oynx here to give you a review! :D First, it dragged on without any description. Now, I'm a little biased because I am a sucker for description, but ...

I'm sorry that I didn't answer you! This guy is actually a girl! ^_^ Also, when I was working on the 'revised' version, I considered dropping this entire prolouge and ...

Thanks for the welcome, everyone! It's nice to see so much support. I think I'm already getting addicted. ^_^ I've reviewed some of the works and I must say, you ...

Thank you all so much for your reveiws! (: I appreciate you, Lorril, for giving me stuff to work on. I see where you're coming from. ^_^ Well, except for ...

Hello, I'm OynxFire and I am ready to review this! First off, I'm not going to correct your grammar because I'm afraid that I might accidentally try to correct you ...

**This is my first ever post here on YWS. Please tell me what you think, and be as brutal as you need to be. ^_^ Tell me if you don't ...

Hi there! OynxFire ready to review. (: Now, I'll start with your first paragraph. I read through it and frankly, I was amazed at the description you used to to ...

Alright, this is my first review so here goes. (: The first thing I noticed when I read this piece was the lack of description. It just keep going without ...