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This is a heartfelt subject, and you did a good job expressing that. The last line is the best: The people in our cities and in our towns Don't ask ...

First off, I love the subject matter. Change is difficult. I think you captured this eloquently. I don't want a new beginning, because starting a new life is ending the ...

Hi! I'm new and glad to be here! Writing is a wonderful thing, and I hope to improve with all of these YWS supporters. And I really need help. Do ...

Grammar and punctuation: So here I was, with my much uninspired speech that I clasped firmly in my hand hoping I won’t forget anything. Your tense changes from past to ...

Oh, I would love to hear this put to music! The 'another...' lines are sharp and haunting. "Where the night is never clear, and stars don't feel like shining" is ...

Only white permeates these borders, these lines around your body; a wedged black marker divided your contours from the rest of the blank-static world. As the knife of a suicide, ...

Even when all the worlds decayed, and in neat rows the dead are laid, and among the rows lay You an I, nobody left to mourn or cry. This is ...