OxfordandOnyx

Hi Queen! Nice to have you on the site (and yeah, most of us have a good sense of humour too :D)...If you need anything, don't hesitate to PM me. ...

Hey Joy! It's always nice to see a new writer hop on aboard and I hope you'll share some of your stories/poetry with us :) me if you have any ...

You play the flute huh? I've always thought playing the flute would be so cool but I never managed to get the thing to make a noise :S Anyway... welcome ...

Rebel! Beware, we shall force you to join Snoink's evil minions! :xd: Oh, and Welcome to YWS-- (we're a friendly bunch really) :P Hope to see you around the site! ...

Hey, Eternally confused! :) It's nice to meet you, and I hope to see you around the site! You can PM me if you have any questions or just generally ...

My tip would be to try reading some parts out aloud so you don't skim over mistakes you may make when reading in your head. :)

Hey Katie! Great to see you posting another version of the poem, as it's all about seeing what works and doesn't work. Now, don't let the whole repetition thing get ...

*Claps* Congrats! :)

Hey there! Thought I would give you my take on your poem :) First off, I really liked the first three lines as they were fluid and rhymed nicely and ...

Hi there Herzing! Thought I might drop in my person take on your poem! :) Nit-picks that erupts at black bird's twilight. The first two lines of your poem are ...

Hey there ozasatya! First off, I have to warn you that reviewing poetry isn't something I'm good at but I thought I might as well try and give you my ...

6/10 :)

5/10-- not really a fan of McFly :P

I don't know if it's just me but it's really small, I wish I could see the picture! From what I can see the sky does look lovely and I ...

Maddy! :) Welcome, I hope to see you around the site :D