OxfordandOnyx

Hi, I'm OxfordandOnyx and I'll be reviewing your work (: You're grammer is fairly good, there are a mistakes but re-read a few times and you should be able to ...

I'll leave out Breaking Dawn which was horrible... Jane Eyre- I liked the film adaption so I thought I would give the book ago but seriosuly, I just could not ...

This is a very beautiful photo you've taken (: I agree it is hard to distingsh the trees from their reflection in the water. Maybe it's because (it seems...) this ...

Not at the mo. (: TUBM should be doing homework right now- but is kind of distracted

Apparently the guy was drunk off his head but that's no excuse. And yeah, it's not the first time he's done something like this. I remember when he didn't win ...

Hi, I'm OxfordandOnyx... Let the revewing begin! (: I am aware you said this first chapter will not give away much so I wil bare that in mind. However, I ...

You say seasame seed buns i think McDonalds (:

Even though I am no Taylor fan, I have never seen anything so rude in my life. Wow, I can't believe someone would do this. 19 year old Taylor Swift ...

Hello, I'm OxfordandOnyx and I'll be reviewing your story (: Grammer Yes, there are obviously a few mistakes but if you re-read you'll find most of those yourself and then ...

You get nothing because you didn't insert a coin (: -Insers coin-

You say Okay, i think happy

Wierdo crocbird?! 8/10!!! (:

You get an orange (: -inserts coin-

If you got an idea and it takes you two minutes to write it down, then let it be. I've sat in lessons and written poems whilst wating for the ...

4/10- I like Rihanna's song but not McFly (: