User avatar

OwlsFly

  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Changing World

    Hi. This is my first review of a short story, so I will try to keep this helpful. Once your arm falls off, it’s not hard to figure out that ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Aftermath

    Hi there. This poem had an air of sorrow that I wasn't really expecting. I have read a couple of your other poems, and they lacked the emotion that could ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Fragile Things

    Hi! I absolutely loved this. The whole poem just breathed fragile. Your word choice was so impressive. Each word matched the message you were trying to give and that is ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Cursed

    Hello! This was really good to me. I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme in this piece which is unusual for me, because rhyme schemes feel forced most of the time. ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Luna

    @ Katarina: Luna was supposed to be about the moon, but towards the end it kind of evolved into just about the night sky. I wasn't really trying to be ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Luna

    The clouds wrap around me, So I am unseen. The things of nightmares, Hide in my darkness. The things of the best of dreams, Sparkle within my light. I move, ...

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: More So

    Hi, I actually really liked your poem. You did an amazing job with it, because you allowed your reader to connect your poem to something before they knew that it ...

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: deleted

    Hi, I really liked your poem a lot! I think it describes how some teenagers feel during high school. I don't know if you meant to, but when I was ...

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Do you have a Twitter account?

    I have one, but never use it. The only tweets I make are from my tumblr. :)

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: ~Weathered

    Hello there! I'm going to start out by saying I really enjoyed your poem. I'm not good with nit picky stuff, so I'm just going to stick to things I ...

    May 5, 2011


clpck
— Hop (Trying to Spell "clock")