Overlord

Thank you both for helping, I will change as much as I can and try to make the story less boring and yes mikedb1492 it is an out line for ...

I like this part as well. I think that Galica is Ireland in a way, am i right?

I like where this story is going so far, it catchs my atterntion from the start.

That leaves you hanging, i like it. its pretty interesting.

My name is Alexander. My name was originally Alexsandr. I am of Russian heritage. For three years I lived in comfortable living off of a soviet soldiers income, but I ...