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Re: Love Gone Forever
Ok so the first thing I notice here is that it's very cliche. Love poems are hard to do while keeping them different from every other love poem. The main ...
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Re: Foster Care System of America
I think the idea of foster care is good in theory, however sometimes things can get out of control. What I mean by that is that sometimes, children tend to ...
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Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
I kinda love it a little, kinda creepy though :) 9/10
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Hello, I'm a newbie!
Hello Lucas, Welcome! I'm Tiffany, or Tripp, or OverEasy. PM me if you need anything :) Good Luck!
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Is homosexuality a psychological disorder or is it inate?
^ That's essentially what I was trying to say. Not that just being gay is beautiful, but that love and sexuality in general is beautiful. That's all.
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: A Clean Bite--Prologue[rewrite]
Prologue “I’ve loved you since freshman year. I want us to be together. I love you.” She told him everything. She’d kept it in for a long time but she ...
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Re: Is homosexuality a psychological disorder or is it inate?
Being gay is a beautiful thing. Being straight is a beautiful thing. You know why? Because love is a beautiful thing. People who are gay have usually known it, or ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Global Warming
There are many ways you can help, but the biggest problems are in the factories and the over use of automobiles. There are many ways to avoid these things, as ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Global Warming
Sorry! I tend to go off on tangents. It's a thing... I think there is a 12 step program or something...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Alainna's happy to help...
Hello, I'm currently writing a Romantic Fiction novel and a lot of people have reviewed the first chapter. However not a lot of people have reviewed the following chapters, I ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Global Warming
But of course, if that would mean changing their daily routine, why on earth would they even THINK of trying to help?! Preposterous!
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Unloved- Chapter 1 Savior (edited)
I don't mind you being comma happy, I think it actually somewhat works with your writing style. Though in some places it did get a bit daunting. Other than that ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Global Warming
That I can completely agree with, however in order to actually slow down the process again people will have to care. And I'm afraid not everyone will. Humanity at it's ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Global Warming
Hmm, then my teacher is an idiot (which is suspected all along, I swear that women has no idea what she is talking about. Any information she told us came ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Global Warming
It's been covered that we are at fault, but what most people don't realize is how much it would actually take to change the way things are heading. The use ...
Apr 13, 2008
