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I have been pregnant, so as for that argument... I feel quite qualified to comment on what it feels like, and what I needed when I was pregnant. I can't ...

-Lessons interrupted in order for them to use the facilities/ or asking around for food( for nutrition, of course). I am fairly sure that pregnant girls are not the only ...

The way you phrased it certainly made it seem as though you wanted them to be forced to go to the other school, so that was how I read the ...

Personally, I am all out against this idea. For one, you have grouped every pergnant girl together, saying they act the same way, they're disrespectful, etc. However I feel this ...

Name: Luciliana (Luci) Age: 26 Race: Human Class: Mage Gender: Female Appearance: Long black hair with white streaks, fair skin and green eyes. She wears lavender robes with powerful crystals ...

I've never really thought of writing as a "why" or "why not" sort of thing. I write because that's what I do when I am sad/angry/upset/happy/joyous/in love... Writing isn't what ...

The commas and the fragments were intentional, actually. I did change the one run on sentence mentioned above mostly because I felt it was more powerful when it was split, ...

If you've got the time, I would love a review on this Please and thank you! Tiff

If you have the time, I would really love a review on this . Please and thank you in advance :) Tiff

It's been a while, but I need to get back into the reviewing game, so here goes. First Impressions: The language here lacks a certain level of poetry, you're asking ...

The.Dreamwalker: I kind of agree about the last line, it was one of those last minute adds that I did while editing, when I had already sort of lost the ...

Enabler: one that enables another to achieve an end; especially: one who enables another to persist in self-destructive behavior (as substance abuse) by providing excuses or by making it possible ...

So it's been a while since I have reviewed, and I hope I am not too rusty. Shaking, thoughts racing teeth clenched voices raising. (anger) First thing that jumps to ...

Lulz. I read it, if that makes it any better?

(So, so sorry this took so long) Despite my tears I felt myself smile sheepishly. “That’s Patches, and I am Lucy.” I stuck out my hand, wiping my tears away ...