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A little something I just wrote, not my best, but atleast I am writing again. Anyways, I know it needs work, but... First impressions? Bleached Ivory linen waved in my ...

I am moving in two weeks and packing is freaking me out. I have too few boxes, and no packing tape. I can't put my books in boxes until I ...

Wow. Your use of description is amazing, I can picture everything that is taking place at all times. Every detail is very precice, and the characters are very well developed. ...

Lol of course it's possible, I am just saying it's not always the best option for everyone. If I wanted to, I could stay abstinent. The issue is that I ...

I believe you need to know all aspects of a person in order to know if you're going to work with them for the rest of your lives. That includes ...

First Impressions Well the first issue with this poem, is that it feels like you wrote it in about two minutes. There is so little emotion behind it, and it ...

Most of those aren't cliches, though. =/ What he said.

First Impressions Emotional poems tend to be a little more difficult to convey, and I can see that you've had issues with Imagry here. Understanding and creating effective Imagry when ...

Grammar, Punctuation, and Spelling I cringe at the lack of grammar and proper spelling in this piece. The first thing I suggest is that you touch up on your basics. ...

A few birthday pictures :D

Dono-- For obvious reasons

There was a spot of something funny on the table cloth at the coffee place; just a tiny little brown splotch off to the left. My eyes bore into it ...

First Impressions The first thing that stands out (and not in a positive way) is the rhyme scheme. The first stanza feels so forced, specifically because of the rhyming going ...

First Impressions This poem is begging you to punctuate it properly , I mean... begging. A lot of people think that poetry does not need punctuation, but in short, it ...