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Probably a mixture of self gratification as well as wanting to improve your works. That's what it is for me, anyways. Especially when you know something has great potential but ...

Baha! New hairs.

The explanation is pretty simple for him being there right on time. He's been tracking/following her through his forest since she got there and decided to step in before she ...

No offence June, and I truly don't mean any here, but the entire intention with Seante was to show the views of an entire culture. In the culture I am ...

First Impressions The first thing I felt after reading this was that it was lacking in actual feeling. Each line feels so emotionless and dry. With all of the "I ...

First Impressions I hate to be cruel, but for a poem titled "Unique" this certainly didn't stand up. The first thing I notice is how very flat it feels. Perhaps ...

Well, first I'd like to comment on the mispelling of the word "story" in your title. Might want to fix that ;) On the content, there isn't much here to ...

A/N once again I am looking for a view on the plot rather than the nit picks :) Chapter Two: Lost and Found Dracen traveled north, as she’d told her ...

A/N please keep in mind this is a horribly rough draft simply set in to give you a basic feel for the characters, I am currently in the process of ...

Or possibly because they're insecure about their work? That could possibly play a hand.

I'd just like to say that you can always argue a point with a reviewer if you feel like they are wrong. Don't be a jerk about it, but I ...

Just a not, having sex does no mean any of the following. You will *always* get an STD. You will *always* get pregnant. You will get a bad reputation for ...

No. Why? Freedom of speech. We were given it to practice it, even in the most vulgar ways. Is it wrong and hurtful that these serious illnesses are mocked by ...

I can assure you there is no such thing as a "gay disease" to say so only shows how ignorant you really are. And sadly, I fear you will never ...

*snort*