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If you wouldn't mind, my dear.

That's kinda the point.

In this dark night, of shaking, painful, fear-- my eternal pessimist breaks down his walls. Watching me, his fingertips on my cheeks as he absorbs my anxiety. I am here, ...

First Impressions Punctuation, punctuation, punctuation! This poem is begging you to punctuate it properly. It's on it's hands and knees! In all seriousness though, this poem is in dire need ...

First Impressions The first thought I have is that it reads like a prayer, not a poem. The main problem here is that it really *is* a prayer, not a ...

First Impressions The images that you've created give a clear picture, but one stanza in particular doesn't seem to fit the rest. I remember the blood spilling ever so clearly, ...

First Impressions I quite like this piece, the metaphor is great because the reader can input anything that happens to be their vice. You've taken that idea of a cigarette ...

Aww cute Monki :) Demi you look lovely, as always.

I tried to edit my biography and whenever I hit enter it told me "the value of my post is too long" and it won't allow me to update it. ...

I don't think having to pay to post in the storybook forum is necessarily a bad thing... just thought I'd throw that out there :)

First Impressions The first stanza is interesting, the flow is lovely, in my opinion, but the meaning of it gets somewhat lost. I mean, I get it, I get what ...

Introducing computers to children at a young age is more than beneficial in this society. The main reason being, knowing how to use a computer is essential to education today. ...

Ooooh purty ^^

I wouldn't be living in California o.o

On people's profiles, if you are looking at the guest book area and you try to click on the next page it takes you to the main forum area? *is ...