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Re: Four Basics for Good Writing
I was thinking today, and in my opinion, good writing can be broken down into four different things. These are the things that you need in order to write effectively. ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Black Ink [edit]
Present tense is difficult for some people to read comfortably. I know it feels like you're giving it a sense of immediacy, like, this is happening now, but sometimes past ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Black Ink [edit]
[Go to comment 10 for rewrite in first person] “How does the defendant plead?” the voice echoes in the room. The audience waits quietly for the answer, biting their lips ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Temptress: Prologue
Yes, but I agreed with pretty much everything you said :) Therefore I didn't feel the need to comment.
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Temptress: Chapter One
Lol I assure you this story will not have anything to do with Twilight. It sort of starts out like Twilight (think of it as my form of a Parody, ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Temptress: Prologue
Karsten> Indeed, my characters are not meant to be liked, at first. Both brothers are intended to be somewhat unlikeable characters at first, as they are both very old Vampires ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Feelings on Atheism
Light_Devil, I hate to undermine anything that you have said, but it was not religion itself that caused war, rather it was caused by religious extremists. If you look, and ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Temptress: Chapter One
Lucy left the club feeling invigorated and lazy in the same moment, she walked the alley slowly, her jacket slung loosely over her shoulder and her hair in glorious disarray. ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Badges or Ranks?
I like the badges... but I wanna keep my purple name cause it's purty >.>
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Temptress: Prologue
A story I have been meaning to play with for ages, I am excited to finally get it under way. Temptress, he hissed, the word rolling on his tongue like ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Tips for reviewing poetry?
(I am basing this purely off of the idea of a poem that is written properly, no large glaring errors in grammar or spelling.) This one is actually sort of ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: What's your guilty pleasure book?
Do you have a book that you know you shouldn't adore but do anyways? Mine is Blood and Chocolate, along with an assortment of "smut novels" by various authors. What's ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: What book are you currently reading?
Well let's see. I've just reread the whole Harry Potter series, because... I felt like it. And I've just borrowed Misery by Stephen King from Dono's little sister, which I ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Pregancy test strips?
Lol k, For some tests, the strip turns blue, others have a plus mark and the fancy ones have an electronic read out. I'm not fully sure what information you're ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Pregancy test strips?
Pregnancy* They are essentially reading to see if a certain hormone is in your system. If it is, you're pregnant.
Jan 1, 2010
