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Oh goodness, Vanessa would probably keel over and die. She's not exactly tough when it comes to things like that. Lucy would take the responsibility head on, making sure she ...

Eh, it's fine, it suits your pen name, of course. 8/10

Well first off, I would like to say that I think your imagery is very beautiful. It's not too extravagant but not plain either. He pulls one knee up to ...

It was decent, but you shouldn't cut sentences in half to save the flow, it just screwed the flow up entirely.. As I said at the beginning of the post, ...

She smiled at him. It was a warm sort of smile, absent of the anger and spite he had expected and full of kindness and strength. It was almost mocking ...

When you have, on more than one occasion, called yourself a YWSer. (Not yewis -.-)

Lol from an amusement standpoint, this is pretty funny. From an actual poetry standpoint... err xD It could use some work?

Lol. Nice.

*giggles* Their scumbaggary knows no bounds. Sorry, I felt an unhealthy urge to say that.

Err... I thought the reasons for plagiarism being bad were pretty self explanatory, to be honest. Just sayin.

Joshuapaul, Though I appreciate your opinion there is one thing you cannot say, and that is that this did not happen. Because, yes, yes it did. Infact that line that ...

*salutes* no problem.

[EDIT to First Person] “How does the defendant plead?” the voice echoes in the room. The audience waits quietly for the answer, biting their lips as if this is their ...

I am starting to think the whole piece will be far more effective if I rewrite it in first person. I'm going to edit tonight and see how it works. ...

Gal, I appreciate that you have your opinions, however, don't ever tell me or anyone else to throw a piece of writing away simply because you are not a fan. ...