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District 9 is pretty pro. I'm also a big fan of ET :)

Name: Tiffany Age: 19 Gender: Female ______ Top 3 Movies Title: Pride and Prejudice, the A&E mini series Genre: Drama/Romance Title: 500 Days of Summer Genre: Drama/Romance Title: Dangerous Beauty ...

Lol I really wouldn't name a boy Cora. But I'll see if I can make her gender more clear.

(rated for swear words) My fingers trembled, my eyes scanning nervously around the crowded streets, searching for the perfect target. I couldn't see my mom -only seen when she wanted ...

First Thoughts If I were you I would go through this and edit it. Not capitalizing your "I's" and the lack of proper punctuation is not only distracting, it makes ...

Nate... thanks to you I now know what my life calling is.

What will I do with my free time now?

Very true :D

Cliches in Poetry So what makes a “cliché”? In my opinion, a cliché is a well worn idea presented in a well worn way. People are irritated by cliches because, ...

In order for something to count as a review it has to be 250 characters long. It's possible that your posts have just not been long enough to count as ...

I almost cried.

First Impressions The main problem that I have with the piece is the repetition of the initial line. I realize that you did it on purpose, but in the long ...

Jenna> on the topic of stanzas, I rarely ever have stanzas in my poetry for whatever reason xD it's not that I am opposed to them, it's that I find ...

I'd just like to point out that even in lyrics, proper spelling and grammar are a plus. Especially the spelling :) you may want to go through and fix it.

So I read this once, then twice, then three times, and the only thing that came to my mind was this: slow down! It's okay, breathe, and slow down a ...