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Chapter 3: Reunited and Realizations It was only moments later they reached the door. Ajax broke through it like it wasn’t there. Lexica lay on the floor, her raven hair ...

Good points: the idea is good, the reader understands the message. Bad points: It's a little boring. You haven't put any emotion into it. Somehow it just feels a little ...

I wrote this to my friend because all she does is complain about herself. I know some of you know people that do that, so maybe you can understand. Also ...

Every night I crave you I miss your scent, your touch Miss your arms around me Do you miss me much? You say the words I don't know what you ...

I try not to be harsh, but this really wasn't my favorite. It feels so forced. Compairing blood to ketchup just seems wrong somehow. It feels to me like you ...

Good points: Your emotion is good, the reader doesn't have to try and figure out what you are talking about. Bad points: The point of the poem was reached long ...

I think everyone understands the whole writers block thing, but this is kind of lacking. Put more emotion into it maybe? Great use of words though :)

My poetry tends to have capitolizations in odd places. I don't really know why, I guess its just the style i like the most. Sometimes I use punctuation, other times ...

Years of love you said you gave me Years of pain I am supposed to forget You forgot me, time and time again. I hope some day you'll see the ...

I really love these, the second two are my favorite. The use of color is grand, and the body shapes are very interesting. All three are fun to look at, ...

I tend to agree with the "little girl" being creepy. But also i can understand the view of the narrator, when you love someone that loves another it is hard ...

haha the girl in the picture is me. I look different in that one, but yeah that is me

I really love these, the last one has a really interesting perspective. Job well done!

i am actually not a big fan of Twilight either. The writing style really bothered me, and kind of bored me a little.