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The first thing I noticed was how much you repeat your self. I think it is very hard to repeat and make it work, unfortunately it doesn't work very well ...

I look at you You are looking at me You look away I look away then again at you ok so first thing I noticed was the use of the ...

i actually really like this, the ending is really good. i like the way the poem changes from this girl thats a mess to a goddess among us. it flows ...

I rhyme in most of my poetry, for some reason thats how it comes from my brain onto paper... that's just how I work I guess. Sorry if it bothers ...

I watched them from a far distance in shock, They were flirting and holding hand so I started to walk, " He said he loved me , he said he ...

Ok so the good thing is we can all tell exactly how you are feeling, which by the way can be hard to do. The bad thing is it is ...

The poem is confusing I know because I wrote it. But it isn't terrible like ya'll said. Its just differnent . I agree on some of the critique but not ...

A Small Kid Dream It overlooks a beautiful day we glint in our eyes We can feel the affection, warmth, flavor and we can smell the sea We see ourselves ...

Please be gentle, I wrote this when I was 12. You stole away my childhood My dreams, my heart, my soul I became so distant My mind became so cold ...

Pretty much what colleen said, she pretty much knows what she is talking about. Still, it was fairly good, just needs a little reworking. I won't go on about the ...

This is fantastic, I have seen a lot of pictures where the view is from the ground, but this just seems to have a new spin on it. The dew ...

( I know this needs some serious reworking, but for some reason I can’t get certain stanzas to flow no matter how hard I try. Suggestions?) Your eyes are bloodshot ...

by the way i did take these pictures haha

YES she is a girl. Just slightly... gay. And kinda butch.. My Favorite We edited this one together So effing Cute! Me and her :) i just love this picture, ...

PLEASE REVIEW! i know this is kinda bump. but this poem is very close to my heart. i like harsh criticism that is contstructive so please don't be afraid to ...