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Aww thanks you guys! I know this must be the most fantabulous peice of literature you have ever seen :)

Rated PG13 because of language and insinuated sex. If you don't like harsh language please don't read this. I did a little editing, to explain the sarcastic reaction to the ...

I am really sorry to say that I agree with Cade here. It's not really a poem, more a jumble of words thrown together. The style is interesting, but destracting, ...

i love it, it makes me smile :)... see!

Ok so my creative writing teacher gave us an assignment; to write the worst poem we could. This is what we came up with as a class. :) I love ...

I really really love this, it was.... well it was brilliant. Keep up the good work. That's all I can say.

Camping Trip Sunburns as red as cooked lobster Cold lake water on a hot summer day Happy dogs play fetch with enthusiastic owners Giddy children chase each other; playing tag ...

Ahh, I do enjoy when people don't just defend their work, but tell all of us that we don't know what we are talking about. It's so funny to watch ...

I really agree with the statement about the Old English, it would be better left out. And I also sort of question the repitition, I can't decide if I like ...

Haha I like the "greatest pits of heck" it's pretty adorable. I say 10/10 just for that little bit.

Hi! Welcome to YWS! Onto the poetry. you stare at me with bitter eyes, resenting me for privilege You've never tasted my tears, say i never shed them This I ...

Thank you so much for the reviews guys! You have no idea how much they mean to me. I did a little editing, and I think it works better now. ...

I really like this actually... the only thing I would change is this stanza. "Without a second glance It’s trampled underfoot. We destroy the homes of many, And trees are ...

Hmm what to say about this one... I wrote it after a long conversation with my ex. Funny how something that happened three years ago can still affect you. Anyways ...