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Thanks for the review Spearmint! I am definitely delighted to have finished the novel also, and while I do have some slight changes and edits to make in later chapters ...

Another great review, thanks again Mailice! Your thoughts on Blake on how he has the idea and will, but lacks the execution is a pretty good summation of what's happening ...

One reply right after the other, don't mind me! I'd already glanced over your comments and am just rereading them hence why the replies are so quick. Your feedback is ...

Thanks again Mailice! You're definitely an awesome reviewer. Pointing out that I was good with description and action is actually very reassuring since I was under the assumption that writing ...

Thanks for the read Mailice! Been a while! Yeah, I'll definitely change that dialogue into something less comical, thanks for pointing that out. You had a lot of other great ...

Not late at all! I appreciate the review however late or early it might seem. It's great to hear that even in the final chapters, I am still keeping some ...

Thanks so much for your feedback Lim! I am super appreciative of the fact that there are some readers who were willing to see the story through to the end, ...

Hey Salis! Thanks so much for the review! I can definitely understand your concerns with the sharp ending to this conflict; action scenes have never been my specialty and maybe ...

Hey Lim! After reading your comment about the dialogue...yeah, I think I have to agree. I'll definitely have to change some of that around at some point. The timeskip suggestion ...

Thanks a bunch for the review Spearmint! For some clarification, June has been described a few times in previous chapters as wearing a rosary as it is important to her, ...

Hey Lim, thanks for the review! You make an excellent point about the sort of dark dream sequence; I suppose I hadn't thought all of the elements through when writing ...

Great feedback! I was always a smidge worried that the sudden end to the climax might disappoint some but I'm glad to be wrong at least in your case. Thanks ...

Helpful feedback as always Lim! Kinetic scenes haven't always been my strength, but as the climax of this book at least I'm glad that a lot did come across as ...

Don't mind the late reply! Thanks a bunch for the review of this. I had to read through your critique a few times and the chapter a little, so I ...

Thanks for pointing out some things! I will be sure to look it over again and make some minor changes. Hope you enjoy the rest!