OrionRising

Hi everyone! I've been a little lost in my own mind lately. I've just heard back from colleges and now I have a month to decide where to go and ...

For those of you who don't know e is a mathematical symbol used to represent an irrational number (much like pi) which is approximately equal to 2.71828. My story starts ...

The Verbalization of Noses: 21st century texts show that the evolution of the verbalization of noses is strangely detailed yet highly overlooked in high school classes today. This presentation of ...

Complete a short film and a song.

Alright. So, I don't really agree with NaRachel at all. First off all, I don't find your song to be very good. Sorry, but that is the truth and it ...

I wrote this a long time ago. I haven't written much lately so I figured I might as well post this sense it seems decent to me. Anyways, I give ...

Okay well, I really don't right much poetry but this came in on me the other night and I quite like it. I really want CONSTRUCTIVE responses. I don't really ...

Emo-punk and rock. How dare you classify rock and pop in the same category. They are not even slightly related.

This is certainly a very wonderful piece but I am going to tear it apart as best I can. If I were you I wouldn't expect much feedback from me ...

Okay well I read this about three times in a row and here were just a few of my thoughts. I inhale deeply to cut Deeper into the bare wound ...

(Please tell me what you think. It was a quick write, to refresh my brain and keep my writing skill active. Just comment on whatever catches your eye. Thanks- Brie♥) ...

A secret kept A secret lost Another entrance to the room cut off. But I say I get in there some day I really don't think that this line makes ...

Bluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh. This needs work. ------------ Can you love me The way I want to be loved? Can you touch me The way I want to be touched? These first four ...

Well, as far as poetry goes this reminds me of one of those things that a teacher might have up on the wall of their room, it is pretty good ...

Well I don't know how anyone can call the posts above critiques, they not the least bit helpful. Anyways I'll do my best to help with your song. Remember everything ...