OriginalKommadant

ANOTHER CLASSY-ER PICTURE

This is pretty good! Like one poster said, Add more detail. Actually...ADD MUCH MORE DETAIL...And maybe explore your characters a little more. I KNOW I KNOW...You didnt post a lot ...

Wow! this is great. You took the typical "Abandoned/outcast farmboy rejected/abandoned by his familY" route but then made the inside filling of this routine story very unique! Like I always ...

Luxian waited, patient yet anxious, in the far west corridor of the Fremon castle. It was about midday, and the confusion over Dresden's heir apparent and delayed crowning were beginning ...

This was good! a really cool concept with original characters! all of the corrections were made by reviewers I'm not going to beat the moose (Yeah, i just made that ...

Thank you!

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Dude...thank you! you are like a god among men...When I saw that you reviewed my story I was like "Oh SH-"...hahaha. Thanks i'll make the edits when I have the ...

Picture of me 7.png So yeah...this is another pic of me...teheheheehhe

It had been three long weeks since Dresden's encounter with Kelsie. Three weeks since he stood before the high nobles. Now, he was settled, his wounds were healing, and he ...

Ok, thanks I'll edit when I have the time...

By the time I finished the first paragraph, my first thought was "My god...another one of these? But as I continued to read....I started to love it. The main character's ...

*Sigh* Ok, Let me start of with saying that this was, in itself, a good book. One poster compared it to eragon, and well, I hated eragon...But this was actually ...

"HE CANNOT BE KING!" And indignant voice called out that erupted the diplomacy chambers into another round of vicious debate. Dresden sat in the crossfire of it all, sitting on ...

These are nice! The contrast of colors in all of them is great, and I like the first one the best. The pictures, as a whole, have a great feel ...