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Thank you and I will take it into consideration!

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It was a good start to a book but I think someone of the content could do not in the first chapter but in the ones after it. I feel ...

It was a good start to a book but I think someone of the content could do not in the first chapter but in the ones after it. I feel ...

Thank you and you are right! I will change that.

Thank you for saying that and now that I read it I agree with you!

I think that the flow was good. But one thing I didn't like was the use of White Wolf over and over. I think you used it a little to ...