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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Old Story!

    I'm not exactly sure why you would expect a helpful critique on something that hasn't been revised and is more than a year old. A first or third revision is ...

    Jan 12, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Four Seasons

    Before you read on, stubbornly tell yourself that you are a good writer. an open-minded one of course but a good one. First and foremost it is extremely important that ...

    Jan 9, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Mostly Here to Critique

    Thank you for all the welcoming comments. I am now currently working on a crtique for every member that has posted here as a token of my gratitude. Please feel ...

    Jan 8, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Mostly Here to Critique

    Well, it's true. This forum is most likely to contain TONS of YA Fiction but the way I see it that it doesn't have to be limited. I think what ...

    Jan 8, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Mostly Here to Critique

    Hello, my pen name as well as artist name is Orchestrate . I am a student at a state university, going into the second semester of my freshman year. My ...

    Jan 7, 2009


Excuse me I have never *lied* about a character I just don't tell the truth
— AceassinOfTheMoon