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Not to sound callous, but Heath Ledger's dying has got this film an awful lot more publicity than it would have got otherwise. Still, what's not to be gobsmacked about ...

watching the it close its eyes in the sunshine. Remove the word 'the' "close your eyes." ... "just shut your eyes" he pleaded. "please?" A little issue with capitalization. 'Please' ...

Firebrand: It's actually a pretty good title. Sounds a little fantasy-ish and action/adventure. I enjoy it, I would definitely pick it up. In the Flames We Dance

The class then shut there mouths and sat down. ... "Now, today we're gonna start a new topic. Algebra." The class all groaned. Sentence 1 - 'there' should be 'their.' ...

I have cousins who live out in Portland and I have been there a few times. It isn't the best weather up there, usually cloudy and rainy. It is a ...

My nightmares that I remember: 1. Spiders killing me and attacking me. I was in a long rectangular room and there were 8 posts that made a square in the ...

Dark, ominous clouds covered the moon; casting a shadow over the valley as rain began to fall. Although the semi-colon should look right, it doesn't. It looks like the sentence ...

I really enjoyed the movie. I haven't read the books, but have the first three checked out from the library. I went opening night with a friend and there were ...

“Samantha Sampson, wake up this instant!” A loud crack filled the room as ruler met desk. The sleeping blonde girl woke up immediately as the teacher glared at her. It ...

1. I am trying...ish. 2. to eat as much chocolate and peanut butter as possible 3. Doctor Who? 4. Yes 5. Because I said so.

Jing sat at the small table he used for as a desk when writing his tales for the minstrels of the village. Is it "for" or "as?" He gaver her ...

I always listen to music, I either listen to the radio, a cd, my ipod, or I have a song stuck in my head. Music is really the only thing ...

It's been another late night at school, dark ness already flooding the world at five oclock. It's tuesday - she skipped work again, whilst the proceeds of our scarse money ...

“ As well as or better than I , you know that is a lie. You cannot hate me now. That point of no return has already been passed.” I ...

The millions of twinkling stars dotted majestically on the vast cloudless night sky seemed to be holding a conference with each other. That's a lot of adjectives, I would recommend ...