OptimismUnderRain

So you're telling me... I have the option to publish anything I want for free?! Whatever that is in my heart that appeals to me. Not only that but... I ...

This is a true story that actually just recently happened. At the same time, this is also my first story to publish on YWS. so please give me as much ...

I like this little thought of yours. I ask myself that same question a lot to. I think everyone does In my opinion death is just your retirement from life. ...

I Loved this poem. It's absolutely brilliant. I can feel you're emotions and all the thoughts that you've had on this journey; and that ( in my opinion) is how ...

Hello, this is really a cool iambic pentameter. It's a little sad, but its understandable... it's something we can all relate to. I found one mistake though: The line "Wishing ...

Be thankful of your days and live them without regrets. Have fun, do things just to say you did it. have fun. you only live once :) Days are ment ...

Ireally like this. It deeply shows how growing up is rough. I can easily connect with this, and I'm sure almost everyone here can too. I really like how there's ...

I'm not the kind of person that writes all lovey dovey... but I wrote this Iambic Pentameter sonnet for an assignment and felt like I should share it. Just as ...

This is a very good portrait! great shading, that's probably the best quality. In my opinion, One shoulder looks bigger than the other, but that could just be me. But ...

D Singer, this is amazing. I love everything about it, especially you're structure. I love the single word lines. It says so much in such little. I adore this structure. ...

What is the reason we live our lives like we do; We die with question.

Thanks for the comments :) means a lot. yeah that part was a little fuzzy to me too. But in my eyes i saw it as when others doubt you, ...

Wow, I really liked this piece. It had really good structure. There were a couple silly mistakes you made though: spelling, grammar, capitalization... no biggies though. also Why did i ...

Daylight- Matt and Kim :)

Hey Juju, This story is quite interesting. It definitely kept me on my toes. The end was unexpected; but I agree with BornToShop. When you write my mom woke me ...