OptimismUnderRain

Slight smiles Come at first sight. A simple beginning, Polite gestures amongst Strangers. Slight smiles A feeling of light. A halcyon introduction, To reduce the Danger. Slight smiles Are found ...

To add on to what Cario said, I think you should also Re-read your pieces before posting it, it would probably make you realize your silly mistakes. but on the ...

Another poem entered in a poetry contest, please give feed back:) I open my eyes To look through my list. I don’t know which to pick, Release the sighs. It’s ...

I entered this for a poetry contest and wanted some feedback. Silence Fills my room. Confusion You must assume. Regret Reminds me of the past. Doubt That this won’t last. ...

I LOVE this. 'nuff said. It's dark and bautiful. This is the kind of poems I thrive to read. I think it was written very nicely and flowed very well. ...

Wow! this piece is truely creative! It's so subliminal yet meaningful. I like it. I'd give them some, but daddy would forbid it. This part really shows how you have ...

Hey, can you review my short story? Here's the link: Very much appreciated :)

Yeah I would slightly agree with Flyer, but I would say only try to find another word for either instead or blend, because that part does rhyme. Other than that ...

the Italicized words were song titles. :) thanks for the review, i'll be sure to review for the mistakes.

This is my late night thought process of my life. While I thought of this, I was listening to Death Cab For Cutie. Please Please Please, comment or like this. ...

Hey, I'd really appreciate it if you reviewed any of my writing. thanks :)

Hey, I like the over all thought of the piece, it's very creative. Just a few silly mistakes: If I was old enough , I would drink my sorrows away ...

thanks kace... and I picked up on the subliminal message...

The time has finally come, I exhale that buried sigh. It's the day i've been hiding from, and I tremble my last good-bye We've always spread many cheers. Our memories ...

ok, fixed the little dumb mistakes. thanks for the reviews :D