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Onthemound21

  • Welcome Mat Re: New Member

    Thank you for all your help! Check out my first try at poetry. It's my first try so don't expect it to be all that great.! :lol: Well, I might ...

    May 3, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Well, it's me!

    I don't think you should feel full of yourself posting that. Everyone needs to talk about themselves every once in a while. That's a cool name your dog has. It's ...

    May 3, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: New Member

    Hi! I'm a new member on here. I might need some help around.

    May 2, 2009


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge