Onomatomanic

Thank you for the feedback! I'm not sure if I'm suppose to explain things or not, but here goes. Those first few sentences are suppose to not flow. I did ...

Thank you for the feedback. :) This is a piece I submitted to a teacher of mine and he said the same thing about revision. That last paragraph (despite numerous ...

I love the vocab. Those last three stanzas are great, and the repetition is phenomenal. I love it!

I really enjoyed reading this. The rhythm is brilliant and I think the lack of capitalization adds to the flow. Everything is short and stream lined, instead of jaunty and ...