Omnihat

Hey. As you can tell I'm brand spanking new, and this is my first post. This is the first chapter of my novel and (obviously) I really want some criticism ...

Given the chance, would you save a life?Even if you must suffer through their strife?Given the chance, would you help a friend?Even if it’s your life you must lend?Given the ...

Chapter 1 I lay awake on top of a pile of blankets and pillows. It was soft, like laying on a fluffy white cloud. Shapes danced on the ...