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Thank you Shady for the review! I'm glad you liked this more than the first chapter :D Regarding the mask, it bleeds between reality and non-reality because the mask is ...

This is a bit late, but thank you for the review! I'm glad you're liking the story so far :D it's definitely different than what I normally write, so I'm ...

Thank you Tuck for the review!! :D As for the lack of backstory with this character, I believe the next chapter will delve into this character's backstory a bit more, ...

This is a bit late but thank you for the review!! :D

This is a bit late, but thank you for the review! I agree, stealthed is definitely not the right word, sorry that you had to look that up o.o

SHADY thank you for your review! Honestly I forgot that I asked for reviews on this XD I definitely agree with first paragraph. I was more setting the image in ...

I'm glad that you got that the fight with these two characters isn't actually the point, and that the immediacy of that fight was because it wasn't the main, central ...

Hey Vilnius! This is a bit late, but thank you for the review!! I agree that this escalated a bit too fast, but I did want that to be the ...

I think the whole uncle derick thing makes it feel a bit more childish than personal and everything lol, like "MY UNCLE IS ABOUT TO BEAT U UP :c" than ...

Gotcha, that's understandable! And I am really glad you're finding this useful. I was kinda terrified that you wouldn't and I'd be just doing these reviews to pad my review ...

I honestly think you would be a master at writing young adult novels where a bit of hand holding is helpful and strong characters with a bit of a weaker ...

I FEEL THAT AS A WRITER where im liked "what did i write last chapter??"

Thank you for the review! I agree, those two details were a bit awkward

Hey Tuck!! Thank you so much for the review :D I gotta be honest, I wrote this in a span of a few hours and I definitely didn't refine it ...