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Thank you for the reply and I hoe you like it. To be honest, while I was reading your comment, I was smiling to myself, because all of the points ...

This is the actual entire first chapter of my new book. Hope you enjoy! :)

Oh, lol I have no idea how to do that but will do!

Okay, this is the second part of Chapter 1 that I decided not to put on there yet, here it is! :) Part II of Chapter 1 We walked out ...

Thank you for that info, sometimes I type too fast to see some of those mistakes that I do. I hope you forgive me for those grammar mistakes, I wrote ...

Oh sorry if I didn't mention this before, but my main character, Nicolae, I actually meant for him to be a male :)

BTW: I will only post the second chapter if anyone wants me to, no use in putting effort into a useless story. :) It would be helpful if anyone would ...

Thanks for the reply, it really helps. Really lol. Basically the reason why this isn't detailed very much is because I wrote this part about two years ago. Right now, ...

BTW: There is more to this chapter, and if you want me to put it on there then let me know :)