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There, all fixed, and by the way, Glimmer, by the view of the actual writer of the Hunger Games meant for Glimmer to be blonde, average height kind of, and ...

Thanks so much for the reviews, and about the present tense in chaoter two, I didn't mean to fo that, I mess up some times, but can you make sure ...

Thank you! :D

Okay. :D

Thank you for the review, it really brightened up my day. There is one thing I want to correct, though. My title: The Heart of a Career. A Career is ...

Thanks for the review, as for the "jewel-encrusted curtain" moving is supposed to make the reader imagine that, even though everything is basically "bedazzled" with jewels, they can still move ...

I like it, please write more! I cannot wait to see how it unfolds.

Chapter 1 “Wake up, sunshine!” Lileame said as he entered my room. “The sun is up, and so should you, there is work to be done, you know.” “I know, ...

Why thank you for this wonderful review. Infact, I do not know what I am going to do to further this story yet, but I know that your review will ...

I was actually having a HUGE writer's block with this story, so I know it is boring right now, but you must realize that this is just the first part ...

Ah, I see what you mean, I have tried this before, however, and it doesn't work for me, also the only reason why I made so many details in that ...

As usual, comments are taken seriously and I want your opinion! Please review and comment, and if you like it, please follow me! lol thank you and pardon some of ...

Just to let everyone know, I will not be posting until after the Thanksgiving weekend. Thanks! :)

Just to let everyone know that I will not be posting until after Thanksgiving weekend, thanks! :)

Ah, everything you say is appropriate, but I must say, I don't like to proof my work because I end up writing a whole nother story. I actually made this ...