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Nietta, once a loyal Child of Thanos , finds herself caught between Thanos' ambitions and the will of an ancient source of power. She must decide which side she lies ...

1-4 and 6 apply to me, and go ahead and poke me through PM ^^

The updated one is better than the original, but also very different and presents a plethora of new problems. Like ScarlettFire said above, this does seem more like a preface. ...

I agree with the advice given above, which is probably the best you'll get. A mixture of both ideas would probably be what you want. Like "living giants whose ever-reaching ...

Table of Contents chevron-right Week 1 ♦ chevron-right Week 2 chevron-right Week 3 chevron-right Week 4 chevron-right Week 5

The Story *Spoilers* chevron-right Chapter One 1.1 Rough Draft Summary The story starts upon the looming threat of a super-storm breaching the United States East Cost and hundreds of thousands ...

The World chevron-right Okasee chevron-right Atlanta chevron-right The Envoy chevron-right The Powers

The Characters chevron-right Ryun Saito

The panic of a historic storm causes a small town to swell with evacuees. As reports spread about a freak outbreak in Atlanta, citizens fear that the same may be ...

@Nikayla oh I completely didn't realize that! Technically it is a medical virus that puts the regeneration of cells in the body in overdrive, but also has the side effect ...

Here is the central discussion for Harbingers of Revolution: Quarantine, my LMS III novel. Any discussion is welcome and highly appreciated. Any important updates or links I'll post below, for ...

When having something similar like gender, it's best to focus on what makes them different. Gender is just one thing and the situation with genders can be solved by using ...

@Rosendorn to be honest (we talked a bit about this one to one) but I never thought about colorism. In retrospect, that is a core of racism in general, so ...

I agree with Mea about your original post having no inherit racism, but you do have racism in your story, from what it seems. That's not necessarily a bad thing ...

Hey grace! First of all, welcome to YWS. You've definitely come to the right site for some advice. Alrighty, I will answer these as best as I can. I must ...