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Thanks for the reply, it really helps. Really lol. Basically the reason why this isn't detailed very much is because I wrote this part about two years ago. Right now, ...

I love this scene right here! Reall gets the blood pumping. If you make this into a book, I have a feeling it will be great. I like how you ...

BTW: There is more to this chapter, and if you want me to put it on there then let me know :)

[*]This is my first time putting my stories on a site, so I ask you all to review and tell me if I should further this story, thank you[*] Chapter ...