Omni

The police officers walked up to a crime scene. A wooden box had one door, which was locked and a nail was nailed in from the inside. There was a ...

7/10-I like your first sentence, however, you posted more than one sentence, however I like it anyway. Very vauge, but very desciptive. I woke up from a rustling across from ...

Hello, Shearwater, my name is omniyus, and I was wondering if you could review my work. It is a fanfiction of the Hunger Games, so if you don't know the ...

'Ello there! My name on YWS is omniyus. I'm not really new here, but I'm not old here either. I'm kind of in between and my work is starting to ...

Well, I'm not the best writer in the world, but I consider myself a decent one. I could give you some hints. When using dialougue, whenever you change who ever ...

Here to review :D My work and comments will be in bold. Guards walked on either side of the prisoner in the dark, gloomy, wide hallway. The king watched from ...

I like this story. It really put in some great perspective that is totally new but original. There are some grammatical errors though. quite breaths I think that was supposed ...

Chapter 3 LOL, this is the addition that you all have waited for, hope it makes you more confused! jk Make sure to review, they're like my candy! The bridges’ ...

Chapter 1 There os a prologue to this, and I love reviews, they're like my candy :D “Got to go, Nana.” I grabbed my backpack on the kitchen table and ...

*There is a prolougue to this, so make sure to read it :D * Also, I love reviews, they're like my candy! :) PS:The prolougue is in Fantasy short sotries ...

Okay, here to review! I liked the beginning of the story, but after that it went way too fast for my liking. I didn't really like it that much. You ...

Chapter 1 “Wake up, sunshine!” Lileame said as he entered my room. “The sun is up, and so should you, there is work to be done, you know.” “I know, ...

Chapter 1 “Wake up, sunshine!” Lileame said as he entered my room. “The sun is up, and so should you, there is work to be done, you know.” “I know, ...

Ok, here to review! :D I like the story very much, but there are some things I saw that worried me. During the first few paragraphs, you changed you mind ...

Why thank you for this wonderful review. Infact, I do not know what I am going to do to further this story yet, but I know that your review will ...