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As usual, comments are taken seriously and I want your opinion! Please review and comment, and if you like it, please follow me! lol thank you and pardon some of ...

This is starting to boil up, isn't it :smt003 also that girl I keep on talking about, you might figure out her name soon... :?: Chapter 2 The press had ...

I really like this story, although I haven't read chapters 1-7 (lol total spoiler on my part) but from what I can see of this new character, she has a ...

Just to let everyone know, I will not be posting until after the Thanksgiving weekend. Thanks! :)

Just to let everyone know that I will not be posting until after Thanksgiving weekend, thanks! :)

Ah, everything you say is appropriate, but I must say, I don't like to proof my work because I end up writing a whole nother story. I actually made this ...

Thank you for the reply and I hoe you like it. To be honest, while I was reading your comment, I was smiling to myself, because all of the points ...

This is the actual entire first chapter of my new book. Hope you enjoy! :)

Chapter 1 I glanced up from my staring of the last of the two suns set to see Calyme, Varome's shaman, the old leader. He was a tall strongly built ...

Here to review! Ok, first of all, I love this story, and I can tell it is going to be good. There are some parts that troubled me though. 1. ...

Oh, lol I have no idea how to do that but will do!

I love this story, absolutely love it. I have nothing to say but "wow" I like how you started it as a sort of flashback and then put it to ...

Okay, this is the second part of Chapter 1 that I decided not to put on there yet, here it is! :) Part II of Chapter 1 We walked out ...

Thank you for that info, sometimes I type too fast to see some of those mistakes that I do. I hope you forgive me for those grammar mistakes, I wrote ...

I really lover Harry Potter, so I can tell you some of my opinions. I kinda thought that you just replaced Harry's name with Neville and Ron's name with Harry ...