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I like this story. It really put in some great perspective that is totally new but original. There are some grammatical errors though. quite breaths I think that was supposed ...

Chapter 3 LOL, this is the addition that you all have waited for, hope it makes you more confused! jk Make sure to review, they're like my candy! The bridges’ ...

Chapter 1 There os a prologue to this, and I love reviews, they're like my candy :D “Got to go, Nana.” I grabbed my backpack on the kitchen table and ...

*There is a prolougue to this, so make sure to read it :D * Also, I love reviews, they're like my candy! :) PS:The prolougue is in Fantasy short sotries ...

Okay, here to review! I liked the beginning of the story, but after that it went way too fast for my liking. I didn't really like it that much. You ...

Chapter 1 “Wake up, sunshine!” Lileame said as he entered my room. “The sun is up, and so should you, there is work to be done, you know.” “I know, ...

Chapter 1 “Wake up, sunshine!” Lileame said as he entered my room. “The sun is up, and so should you, there is work to be done, you know.” “I know, ...

Ok, here to review! :D I like the story very much, but there are some things I saw that worried me. During the first few paragraphs, you changed you mind ...

Why thank you for this wonderful review. Infact, I do not know what I am going to do to further this story yet, but I know that your review will ...

This is a prologue of a still developing story. Please review and if you have a negative review, make sure to use constuctive critism! :D The pack had it in ...

I was actually having a HUGE writer's block with this story, so I know it is boring right now, but you must realize that this is just the first part ...

Please Review and tell me your thought, this story is giving me a huge headache :) Never mind, don't review, I am figuring out a way to take this story ...

Ah, I see what you mean, I have tried this before, however, and it doesn't work for me, also the only reason why I made so many details in that ...

Mine is mostly fantasy and science ficton Fantasy: Read my new story, Eternal Dragons, with more on the way! Science Fiction: Another new story, The Rebellion Series Chapter 1 and ...

For once, I don't have much to say about this. I don't know if it is because this is so good or so bad. It's kinda hard to tell right ...