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Re: The Cabin Boy Chapter One
Hello there! This chapter was well written and its obvious you exerted a lot of effort. Unfortunately, there were little bits and pieces that I found to be off. "He ...
Jul 1, 2013 -
Re: Mystic Battles Book 1, The Prophecy: Prologue
Hello, I am Omar your first reviewer. Let's begin with your lovely and very capturing starting paragraph. The dragon's low, moaning call echoed through the forest and faded into the ...
Jan 9, 2012