OhSoSqueamish

Oh, man. Everything about this is absolutely beautiful. The descriptions, the repetition, all of it...gah. So sad. I'm a sucker for angst. I especially love this line: A raindrop prepares ...

Great beginning, it really sets the dark mood of the story. As she walked, she looked down and saw every little imperfection cracked into the walkway, and the grass that ...

My first review, so sorry if I'm doing this wrong... =P First of all, I really enjoyed this. Your characters both sound really sweet and kind of quirky, and I ...