Octave

Hey AM! I was going to give this a line by line, like I usually do, but I found so many punctuation errors. It doesn't seem right to critique the ...

“End it , ” h e coughed, the sound as violent as striking a match, blood spewing from his lips to drip from his chin. At the risk of being ...

I have a super-soft spot for fairytales, but I'm really picky about my rewrites. Let's see about yours, shall we? :) Once upon a time- Well, we wish. Ew. Broke ...

Hey there Poison! So I see someone already proofread for you and did all the nitpicks. I'll stay away from that and give you an overall review, then. Make no ...

Hiiii Julien. 8] I'll get to this straight away, and I won't bother with a line by line crit because this is incredibly short. I noticed a few things about ...

Hi there, Eloquent~ So I've no time to give this one of my line by line reviews, but I'll try to be as thorough as I can in this one ...

So, it seems I'm a bit late with this one, but hey, better late than never, right? 8] I have a couple of problems with this story. The most glaring ...

Helloooo Peanut. So I'm ignoring the books I needed to study because I skimmed over the piece, it caught my attention, and the reviews said it was magnificent. 8] Now ...

Honestly, I dislike prologues, so maybe that'll bias me against this. However, I came by to review because I've seen many an unnecessary prologue and I liked your tagline, and ...

Hey there Gummy! So I'm Octave, and I'm here to review your work. I like to be as honest as possible, so to start off on the right foot, I'm ...

Hey there! So YWS recommended I come review this, and here I am. ^^ I'm Octave, and here's to hoping I'll be helpful to you tonight. So you've got a ...

Hey there Truman! So I read this earlier today, and I wanted to review it right away but my mom dragged me out so I had a whole day to ...

Mmmkay. So it's really late here and I just stopped by to do a review, and I guess I got lucky because I found a short piece to critique! 8] ...

I have to say this is one of the better pieces I've read on YWS. Well done. However, for all that I liked it, I still think it can be ...

Hey there Snake~ Octave here to review. =D I'm afraid I disagree with the first reviewer. This piece might have potential, but it was really weak so it didn't come ...