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Hi cjscoot! I'm going to review your work. It was the perfect day to be starting my third year of high school It was the perfect day to start my ...

And keep in mind we teenagers are the future. Twenty years from now the world is going to hell because those people are going to be the police who should ...

I don't know if these have been posted or not... Long Night in Your Pants Only Hope in Your Pants The Little Things in Your Pants And finally, the Fray's ...

Ballerina

6/10. Informative, helpful somewhat...but nothing apart from that. >.

Hi brainchic212!! I'm going to review your work today. XD He was wearing dark jeans that were just a little too tight for the style around here He wore dark ...

I agree with Banango Cheesecake! And child executions? We shouldn't execute children then. We should put them in rehabilitation or something like that. We should amend our laws to execute ...

Hi Terpsichore! I'm here to review your work. And are the people here really that quick to rip apart work? o.O It was the middle of winter and the rain ...

Uhm...I'd use it to defend myself from wild animals while I go off to pick some fruits to eat. What would you do if you woke up one day to ...

Hello Lord Anzius! I'm here to review your work! I looked down at the legion marching below me, from my camp site on a high cliff. You just used look ...

Hi mikepyro! I'm going to review your work. XD Firstly, I have to figure out where exactly 'here' is. I think the first without the -ly would work just as ...

Greetings from halfway around the world (or a quarter of the way, or an eighth of the way, or even just from the house down the street)! My (pen)name is ...