Octave

I'm supposed to be studying, but I took the time to sneak out and review. ;D So Perse, let's get started, yes? They were doomsday. This sentence is weird, but ...

Hey Kyou! I'm here to offer up a few points, but I'll skip the line by line review because honestly, I've no time for it right now. First up, you ...

Hey AM! I was going to give this a line by line, like I usually do, but I found so many punctuation errors. It doesn't seem right to critique the ...

I'm a terribly forgetful person, so when I write a novel, I like to keep a few pictures of my characters in my computer, to remind me of what they ...

“End it , ” h e coughed, the sound as violent as striking a match, blood spewing from his lips to drip from his chin. At the risk of being ...

Name: Walker Fallon Age: 19 Appearance: Personality: Walker tends to look incredibly unemotional. He usually looks indifferent and it's difficult to provoke a reaction from him. It's not that he ...

I have a super-soft spot for fairytales, but I'm really picky about my rewrites. Let's see about yours, shall we? :) Once upon a time- Well, we wish. Ew. Broke ...

Hey there Poison! So I see someone already proofread for you and did all the nitpicks. I'll stay away from that and give you an overall review, then. Make no ...

May I claim Theodore?

It goes like this: You rush out of the house with a piece of toast in your mouth, shirt buttoned all wrong, and mismatched socks to top it all off ...

Going to lock this.

Banned for hating on spinach.

Banned for being selfish and not thinking of Kitty's feelings about your refusal to ban her and choosing to ban yourself over her.

Banned for not using the force and using the less-awesome method of banning.

Banned for having Larvitar and not Bagon as your avatar.