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Re: Atlantis - Prologue
First off, I'm not doing a nitpick because as far as I'm concerned, this is one of the best prologues I've read on YWS! Why? 1. It's not confusing. 2. ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: For you, my love
Horror. >] I am so feeling halloween-y this week. The fingers of the wind were cold and desperate; Personally I find adding "the" improves the flow, but this is iffy. ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Smile of Victory
*rubs hands together* >] A creepy story? Count me in. That horrible death, which was so pleasurable to my ears at the time of hearing the news, It's really clunky, ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Will You, Won't You, Watch?
Hullo, Maddy! I'll be your reviewer for the time being. Let's begin, shall we? :) I knelt down on all fours, and was greeted with th e sharp, acid tang ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Laugh, Jane, Laugh
Hey there Scratch! Given I've been reading King's Nightmares and Dreamscapes + rereading Nabokov's Lolita, I've a little taste for darker fiction these days. >] Guess you could say I'm ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Symbiosis
Name: Elisabetta Fabian Age: 26.5 Gender: Female Role: SENTRY chief Moral Strength: 10/10 for symbiosis. Would be 11, even. oo" Appearance: Reddish-brown hair, smoky look, and hazel eyes. Decent heigh
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Edge Of Glory *Permission Only | Starting*
Ilarion | Imperial Palace Ilarion would've graced Neri with a reply, but he rather enjoyed watching the princess try and strike up a conversation with him. It wasn't that he ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Straw into Gold
A fairytale rewrite! *throws Pokeball* (>> Sorry. I think the heat's getting to me.) Anyway, on to the review. :) Comments will be in red, awkward sections in green, and ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Novels That Helped You Write Better
The Picture of Dorian Gray , by Oscar Wilde I don't know. I loved it so much I could die. The Lies of Locke Lamora , by Scott Lynch Superb ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: The Protagonist as a Villain and a Hero
In truth, the best characters are neither hero nor villain. They're merely human. Look at it this way. What does Cipher want? Why does he want what he does? Why ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Lifeless Friends(continued) Part 1
Okay, I liked the first one, so naturally, I clicked this one with some apprehension. I'm not big on sequels mostly because the sequels tend to kill my impression of ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Symbiosis DT
! DT! I don't think I'll be able to drive two characters in one SB just yet (I've only very recently gotten back into storybooking), but whoever takes the female ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Edge Of Glory *Permission Only | Starting*
Name: Ilarion Nazar Age: 20 Gender: Male Race: Part gypsy, mostly human Rank Prince Allegiance: Nazar Appearance: Ilarion shares nothing with his father in terms of appearance, save perhaps for ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Symbiosis
O__________O 8D Name: Nicolae Henderson Age: 31 Gender: Male Role: Civilian Moral Strength: 10/10, for symbiosis, but he honestly doesn't give much of a crud about all this. Appearance: Dark ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
Idraax: Sorry it took me so long to get to your question. .________." I hope you can forgive me. Anyway, to answer your questions, yes, this forum is for completed/almost ...
Sep 27, 2011
