ObWriter97

I really loved this poetry. I wasn't to sad like they can sometimes normally be. I don't have any title ideas, but I'm sure you'll come up with something super. ...

I like it. Could you possibly be dealing with some relationship problems? it seems like the anger and or sadness you infused is real. Well done. Keep writing:)

Can't say it was boring, thats for sure! Certaintly had me thinking and to be honest still is:) Nice

WOW. Really made me think Bub'. Can't really critique you on grammar since I'm not good in that department either, but keep up with the mind blowing ideas:)

Well Im not going to be harsh, becuase these are good so there'd be no point and it's not in my nature. Well I really loved the Wonder one the ...

The only thing I have to critique is the fact its a short story~ I just kept wanting to read on for this story. If you wanted to it could ...

Really calming in a saddish way. Throught provoking for a good way:) A poem to remember for sure.

People can really relate to this. Good Job. One of the first works I saw and here and happy that it was:)

Adriane Counting Preface Being twelve and knowing when it’s going to happen isn’t pleasant. The burden I’ll carry throughout my lifetime will forever give me either helpful knowledge or dangerou

Hi everyone! Well I guess I should say I aspire to become an author when I grow up. Well I hope this website allows me to improve my writing and ...