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Nyconz421

  • Other Poetry Re: Foxglove

    I agree with Ofour.

    Apr 2, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Will I End

    Very deep and emotional. It is very good. You show real pain but at the same time show some pain that others have probably felt. Keep it up!

    Apr 2, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Narrow Minded

    So, I've decided. There are people that can write poetry and then there are people that fake poetry. You can write poetry. Besides a few spelling errors this poem is ...

    Apr 2, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Difference Between Landmines and Time Bombs

    LOVED IT. The characters were likable. Reese went on that...I don't know, speech, and I found myself engulfed in the story. It was sad about Reese though, not fair. The ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: An Outcast that Doesn't Care.

    I liked it. It has great potential. It shows that the kid has a great sense of imagination and that he uses it. Ugh, I miss being thirteen.

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: whatever

    This is really good. I can relate to it although maybe thats not good. But I don't care. This was really good. Keep it up.

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Conked Out

    Not sure what the poem is about but the words and lines of it are very good. Only one spelling correction I see that should be made. I'd give it ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Euthanasia

    My family recently put down one of our dogs because he had bone cancer. He was a good dog but he was in a lot of pain. We believed he ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Yours Sweet Sounds

    Want me to be truly honest? This was really good. The only problem that I would have in it are some few errors that are really not that big of ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: You want change?

    I think you are all right. I was just having a really bad evening so I wrote what came to me...I will edit it. Sorry it's so selfabsorbed

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: You want change?

    I had two best friends, One of which I loved. These two best friends met, And began dating. I couldn't see what she saw in him! I still cannot. She ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Abortion

    I believe that it should be legal. Here's two reasons why. 1.) This is the woman's choice. They have to care for the baby once it is born and have ...

    Mar 28, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Engulfed

    Very nice. Is this poem true? I agree with what Riedawriter said. That spot made me double check what I was reading but the poem its self is well written, ...

    Mar 28, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Duo For The Lost Generation

    Pop as in....hmm, I mean it makes work and it blends in with the poem. Its a good thing dont worry.

    Mar 28, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Duo For The Lost Generation

    Wow, this is kinda depressing but it's good. It caught my attention. I liked the last 2 stanzas especially. It fits the rest and makes it really...I dont know, POP ...

    Mar 27, 2007


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