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Re: Foxglove
I agree with Ofour.
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Will I End
Very deep and emotional. It is very good. You show real pain but at the same time show some pain that others have probably felt. Keep it up!
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Narrow Minded
So, I've decided. There are people that can write poetry and then there are people that fake poetry. You can write poetry. Besides a few spelling errors this poem is ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: The Difference Between Landmines and Time Bombs
LOVED IT. The characters were likable. Reese went on that...I don't know, speech, and I found myself engulfed in the story. It was sad about Reese though, not fair. The ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: An Outcast that Doesn't Care.
I liked it. It has great potential. It shows that the kid has a great sense of imagination and that he uses it. Ugh, I miss being thirteen.
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: whatever
This is really good. I can relate to it although maybe thats not good. But I don't care. This was really good. Keep it up.
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: Conked Out
Not sure what the poem is about but the words and lines of it are very good. Only one spelling correction I see that should be made. I'd give it ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: Euthanasia
My family recently put down one of our dogs because he had bone cancer. He was a good dog but he was in a lot of pain. We believed he ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: Yours Sweet Sounds
Want me to be truly honest? This was really good. The only problem that I would have in it are some few errors that are really not that big of ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: You want change?
I think you are all right. I was just having a really bad evening so I wrote what came to me...I will edit it. Sorry it's so selfabsorbed
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: You want change?
I had two best friends, One of which I loved. These two best friends met, And began dating. I couldn't see what she saw in him! I still cannot. She ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: Abortion
I believe that it should be legal. Here's two reasons why. 1.) This is the woman's choice. They have to care for the baby once it is born and have ...
Mar 28, 2007 -
Re: Engulfed
Very nice. Is this poem true? I agree with what Riedawriter said. That spot made me double check what I was reading but the poem its self is well written, ...
Mar 28, 2007 -
Re: A Duo For The Lost Generation
Pop as in....hmm, I mean it makes work and it blends in with the poem. Its a good thing dont worry.
Mar 28, 2007 -
Re: A Duo For The Lost Generation
Wow, this is kinda depressing but it's good. It caught my attention. I liked the last 2 stanzas especially. It fits the rest and makes it really...I dont know, POP ...
Mar 27, 2007
